Score: 10

"Where did the chat text go?"

submission: PalTalk Emo

date: July 17, 2008

I can't believe its been about a year since this happened. There is a lot of laughs lost without the chat scrolling. Anyway, it's great that this found its way onto the portal.

Score: 7

"Reminds me of asteroids"

submission: Pumpkins!

date: October 30, 2006

The game was a little too hard for me. Maybe a difficulty selector would be a nice addition, but not exactly necessary. Adding sound would be great.

Also, I think a change you can make to the game play is to make the pumpkins follow the character off the screen and to the opposite side, instead of them changing direction.

Good job.

Score: 7

"Just a suggestion."

submission: Jeff & Chris Ep 0

date: October 19, 2006

You could probably work a little bit on backgrounds to make them look a little less thrown together and lazy, because it is a little too lazy. The mouths could be a little synched instead of a movie clip for everyone.

Other than that, I liked your style and the characters.

Score: 6

"Intro was a little too long."

submission: Jadd Is a Dumb@$$

date: October 17, 2006

The movie itself looks great, but it was quite short. The repetative music was also a little bit annoying. It would be better if the beat didn't drop after its look finished.

Score: 2

"Filesize WAY too big."

submission: A Roses Thorn

date: October 17, 2006

Probably due to the music. You need to practice drawing fire and bird feathers. I'm not sure what else I can say that would be considered constructive criticism. Good luck in the future.

Score: 10

"That was awesome."

submission: Blahnothing2

date: October 17, 2006

The secret was really funny, it surprised me at first. I can't believe this was made in 2004. It is better than most of the submissions today. Smooth animation, but lack of choice.

Score: 6

"Too many buttons."

submission: Complete Tutorial V1

date: October 17, 2006

As tutorials go, this is one that more helps yourself learn flash and AS rather than help others. It was rather messy to look at and by the look of some of the other reviews, your AS is broken.

Score: 4

"Stopallsounds button needed."

submission: Lock N Load 1.5

date: October 17, 2006

I didn't really appreciate having to listen to the music. The quality of the drawings were subpar, but I did like that you put a lot of accessories on it which is where a lot of these dressup games fail to do. The beginning where you introduced the setting was a plus too (a little over dramatic, and pointless without a story but a plus none the less.)

Score: 8

"Not bad for a stick."

submission: Suicide Kills Ep1

date: October 17, 2006

I can't even say this is like most sticks, because it was a pretty unique plot. The falling bodies were very smooth, they didn't just fall. Their bodies moved to fit their landing.

The load time for something of this style and length was terrible though. I blame it on the song, which could probably use some optimizing. You could edit it to only use the parts you want in the flash, and then compress it some to lower the load.

Score: 8

"Lines are very choppy."

submission: Love is Good

date: October 17, 2006

I'm a little experienced with this style of animation, but like my attempts, it is very sloppy looking. At first, I thought that you were being too literal with the lyrics and your animation, but it began to break free eventually. I really like this flash. Good job.